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Friday 23 August 2013

Persuasive Writing Joseph L Presents JPCC

STATEMENT


The issue that I am about to address is on the case of children working under the age of eight.


POSITION ON THE STATEMENT


I disagree with children working under the age of eight.


SUPPORTED YOUR STATEMENT WITH FOUR STATEMENTS


(1) Children should not work from the age of eight because at work when no other workers are keeping an eye on the younger worker the child might get injured and seriously hurt himself which will cost the company money to pay for his medical bills.


(2) Children might now know how to spend their money. They will use their pay to buy expensive toys and other gadgets and not save any money for their future. Children are just too young to earn too much money.


(3) If children work from the age of eight, they will not have enough time to gain a proper education. They will always be at work and they will grow up to be uneducated.


To conclude, children working from the age of eight is a bad idea because it will not help their future.


By Joseph
Room 7

1 comment:

Lennyx said...

good work joseph

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